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| No prose in this thread Thoughts are expressed in haiku Example below. ****** Foliage adrift Small pond cradles tiny leaf -- Bud sucked into pipe. |
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| more human than human Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: LBC Co-Op: No Vendor: No Patient: Yes
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Rep Power: 304691 | Re: Great big haiku thread no way, d.i.g. people thought I was insane last time I shared one |
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Rep Power: 28914 | Re: Great big haiku thread a horse tail lifts plop! plop! plop! like many haiku |
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| what deaner was talkin' about... Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Antelope Valley Co-Op: NO Vendor: NO Patient: YES
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Rep Power: 40 | spring winds in the desert flame fades before touching herb cut that shit out, kay? |
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| MMJ Patient Advocate (not a doctor nor a lawyer) Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: San Francisco Co-Op: NO Vendor: NO Patient: YES
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Rep Power: 27688 | Pungent buds rustle. Horses, sheepdogs, they all chill. People do not know. Buds, buddies, WT! This haiku thread rocks like Earth. Bong raised, patients smile. Last edited by HappaGuy; 03-14-2008 at 11:02 AM.. |
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| From tiny acorns Slowly grow the "great big" threads: Bump for great justice. |
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Rep Power: 73654 | Re: Great big haiku thread Friday Afternoon Want To Get Medicated But The Boss Is Here- |
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| more human than human Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: LBC Co-Op: No Vendor: No Patient: Yes
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Rep Power: 304691 | Re: Great big haiku thread ok, I give in this syllable counting fun cannot be refused --------- lighter must be dead. bowl's not lit - still I earned a blister for my thumb |
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| ~puff~ Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: California Co-Op: No Vendor: No Patient: Yes
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Rep Power: 29 | Re: Great big haiku thread Reach for Bic Lighter The green plant sizzle, sizzle Breathe out. Ah. Good times. WWW.WALKABOUTJONES.COM |
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Rep Power: 152 | Re: Great big haiku thread buy weed smoke that shit wheres my funnions? |
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| Re: Great big haiku thread striped sweater sea snake the world may be your oyster but you have no hands |
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Great big haiku thread the goo is going room fills up with smoke fast feeling will again wtf. i must be medicated |
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Rep Power: 27688 | Crystal Shiva glows. Cough cough cough cough cough cough smile. Glad sounds, good harvest. Last edited by HappaGuy; 03-15-2008 at 12:29 PM.. Reason: drop excess syllable first line. OOPS. |
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| more human than human Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: LBC Co-Op: No Vendor: No Patient: Yes
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Rep Power: 304691 | Re: Great big haiku thread haiku has one law - use seventeen syllables. no more, no less, please merely examples, here are two classic haiku that I did not write Farewell! Like a bee reluctant to leave the deeps of a peony - Bashō Zombie, Oh Zombie Why was death on vacation on your dying day? - undead Last edited by happyjack; 03-15-2008 at 06:24 AM.. Reason: Bashō has an ō on the end, not an o |
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Five Seven Five is one petal on the blossom. Haiku speak season. Last edited by HappaGuy; 03-15-2008 at 12:32 PM.. | |
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seasons and nature - counting, and pausing, too. we follow the first link... Quote: | ||
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| Re: Great big haiku thread Haiku discussion: Succinct, respectful, polite. U.N. should take note! |
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Great link. Lessons there. Season, counting, pausing. Sails catch and show the wind. Last edited by HappaGuy; 03-16-2008 at 11:18 PM.. | |
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Rep Power: 498300 | Re: Great big haiku thread I wish I knew what a Haiku was! |
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Rep Power: 34092 | Re: Great big haiku thread down the 10 freeway to pacific coast highway on to malibu |
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Rep Power: 27688 | Last edited by HappaGuy; 03-16-2008 at 09:23 PM.. |
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| Re: Great big haiku thread It's a poem (although rhyming isn't necessary) with 3 lines, 5 syllables (or simply sounds, in Japanese) on the first line, 7 on the second, and 5 again on the third. I just looked outside The sun is shining brightly Time to clean my bong :slaugh: |
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Great big haiku thread Grrr Grrr Grrr Grrr You Saw Me In That Lane Now You Take My Wheel |
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Rep Power: 18776 | Re: Great big haiku thread Look, every once in a while genius intrudes. When someone manages to work "funnions" into a poem they get to slide on the whole syllable thing. This rule was adopted by the National Analytical Poetical Society (NAPS) after some ee cummings wannabe wrote "Ode To A Screaming Yellow Zonker" in the late sixties. I read it in Wikpedia, it must be true. |
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